Tada! I've managed to churn it out! Enjoy! 

Hatori's narration: " It was lacking, in my wish which is like a thread. Rita came to my house, even if it's just for a while, i thought that Rita might have realized his feelings, didn't him?"

And she tells Kousuke: "That my wishful things which is impossible."
Kousuke: "Then?"
What actually happened was....
Rita: "This is not you."
Hatori, disappointed with Rita's reaction: "Like that? Rita is easily taken by a suggestive action isn't it?"
Rita: "Huh? When did i?"
Hatori: "You don't plan to? (kiss me), i'm such a natural beauty."
Rita: "I'm listening, can you explain more concretely?"
 
Hatori: "You told Kousuke that 'The one she likes is me', being possessive and all. I was only double checking it to see if you are not swindled by him." (I'm not really sure of the translation for this, i think Hatori is trying to find an excuse to why she kissed Rita.)
Rita: "Huh? What is it?"
Hatori: "Why did you come here? A phone call is enough if you want to apologize. Didn't i told you that these actions are very suggestive?" and she thinks "Oh no, i can't stop, even thou i know Rita has no what so ever kind of feelings towards me."
Rita: "I came here today because i was worried about you."
Hatori: "Why? I looked fine don't l? Like a beautiful woman."
Rita: "I've understood. If my actions seems suggestive to you then i will have nothing to do with you, that is fine with you right?" and he left.

The end.

Kousuke: "Hatori chan, who are you going out with now?"
Hatori thinks to herself "Oh no, i've forgotten." and she said: "I'm sorry."
Kousuke: "So hateful, i told you to wait for me and yet you went home. Well, it's alright... if you give me a kiss if not i'm going to die." Hatori looks troubled.
Kousuke: "If you are not willing, i can write it off."

Hatori: "Let me tell you clearly, even though i said before that it's not easy to forget about Rita but my heart beats fast for Kousuke. However, only a phone call from Rita and i can't see anything anymore." and she thinks to herself "In the end, i can't forget anything." She slaps her cheeks as if trying to clear her head and she thinks "It's so embarrassing." Hatori: "It's so embarrassing that i want to hide myself."
Kousuke: "Then i shall make you forget easily."

And they ended up in a love hotel! Hatori sitting on the bed, thinks "What kind of situation is this?" Kousuke hops on beside her and calls her: "Hatori chan~ Since we are going out, so this kind of this is normal isn't it?"
Hatori's thoughts "NO, NO, NO, NO, this is my first time. Isn't it going to be weird if it's so easily..." Kousuke messing up Hatori's hair and said: "You are being too stiff, too stiff. If you dislike, i won't do anything. Empty your head and leave everything to me, i will be nice and gentle."


Hatori's thought's "No, you are not going to be gentle. You seems like you are going to be rough." and she said: "Then, be gentle please." With a smile (which looks kind of fake to me), Kousuke starts kissing and touching Hatori. While Hatori thinks "Even though i've tried so hard and if this carries on, i will be too pitiful. I hope you can be gentle to me. Rita and Adachi might have done it? Adachi's first time is with Rita?" and she recalls the scene where Adachi tells Hatori to treat herself more importantly.

Kousuke looks shocked and he stopped and asked: "Hatori chan? Hatori has been trying to hold back her tears. Hatori cries and said: "I'm sorry, and as expected, i can't do it." with tears welling up. Hatori's thought's "Why is she only right and me, i'm only wrong? There isn't such heroine around." Kousuke looks at Hatori gently, he pulls her up, pats her head and said: "I understand. Don't cry." Hatori thinks "What am i doing?"

The next day on her way to school in bus she recalls what happened and thinks to herself: "Really! What have i done?" and she saw Adachi and she thinks that it's the worst thing that can happen.
Adachi: "Matsuzaki san, Good morning!"
Hatori: "Good morning." and she thinks "Why now? The person i don't wish to meet most."
Adachi: "It's the first time that we met in the morning. Oh and it's time to change seats soon right?"
Hatori: "Ah..." and thinks "And so? It's alright that you don't talk to me."
Adachi: "Our training camp group will be decides based on our new seating arrangement therefore i feeling excited about it. It's my first training camp thus i'm looking forward to it."
Hatori thinks "Can you please shut up, i don't wish to talk to you." and she said: "Adachi, didn't you hear anything about what Rita and me did yesterday?"

Hatori thinks "Rita might not have told her. I shall let you worry a little too." and she said: "You didn't hear anything? However, if you do... i'm sorry okies? I'll make a move first then."
Adachi: "Matsuzaki san! I've heard about what happened yesterday." (I wonder if the mangaka will revel the real evil look of Adachi in future chapters. I think this is not the first time the mangaka presents Adachi face down then followed by a perfect girl look in the next panel.) It's alright. I don't mind at all."
Hatori: "Are you stuipd Why are you alright with it? Is it nothing to you that i've kissed Rita?"

Hatori: "Why do you think nothing of it? It's not a time to be a good person!" and Hatori thinks that Adachi looks down on her.
Adachi: "What's wrong with being a good person It's not that i think nothing of it. I dislike it very much. Why? I did think for a while 'what's your problem?' but i dislike and gets tired of this kind of me. That's why i think it's better to be a good person. I'm much happier this way."

Hatori cries: "You must be joking. I hate it." and she thinks "I think i've worked hard as compared to Adachi who get attached with Rita so easily. I've thought more about Rita, cried buckets and got hurt because of him. Adachi's smiling face, i don't want it because i don't want such painful thoughts. I'm not going to lose to such a person...

... that was what i thought. Am i wrong? Adachi cried too because i was mean. Even though so, she can be nice to me. How did she do it?" Adachi hands Hatori her handkerchief to wipe off her tears.

And the scene changes to the classroom with the new seating arrangement!!!! Rita is sitting beside Hatori with Adachi behind him and there is an unknown guy between Hatori and Nakajima. (OMG~ i think i love this mangaka, what an interesting seating arrangement!) Hatori thinks "SERIOUSLY? How is it possible for this group to get along well for training camp?" and all the while, Rita is looking outside the window with his back facing Hatori. Hatori thinks that it's the end as Rita is not talking to her and avoiding all eye contacts with her.

Two guys went up towards Rita to talked to him. They mentioned that the girls will be excited with Rita around. Rita: "Let's skip the afternoon class to deepen our friendship (to go Karaoke instead) and i'm not going for the camp." Hatori heard him.

Rita: "I'm not interested in 'everyone being happy' this kind of things." Hatori heard him and she's speechless.
Along the corridor, the two guys with another two girls are talking behind Rita's back. The girls think that Rita is cool but the guys thinks that he's merely a gloomy person. Hatori walks pass and hears them and thinks that since a long time ago, Rita has difficulty getting along with people. She thinks that it's really like him to say that he's not interested but she does not understand why Rita is fine with Adachi. One of the guy asked why is Rita not interested and the other answered asking that he don't know but maybe he has something on with the ugly girl. 

Hatori shouts at them: "Don't treat Rita like an idoit!! That is 100% Rita-feel and that is why, don't complain that he's gloomy!" Rita happens to walk out of the classroom and he hears Hatori defending him.

The two guys apologized and said that they are not talking about her but Adachi. They left quickly. Hatori thinks "Eh, i... Adachi? Oh yah! I can't compete with Adachi. Rita likes Adachi."

Hatori's thoughts "Isn't it great if i become like Adachi? If i want to become Rita's girlfriend, this is the only way."
Rita: "What are you doing?"
Hatori: "Terasaka kun, I think it's better for you to go for the camp." (She follows the way Adachi calls Rita.)
Rita: "I'm not going."
Hatori: "That is not right. If you continue to be like this, how can you make friends?"
Adachi: "Matsuzaka san, but friendship can't be forced."
Hatori looks at Adachi and thinks "Huh? No i can't i'm not irritated with you." (LOL, she's so funny! Trying to convinced herself here.

Hatori, convincing herself that she is a changed person said: "Adachi san, do you know if Rita has any friends from elementary school until now?
Adachi: "Eh.. Terasaka kun, do you have any friends?"
Rita: "I'm afraid not... Adachi."
Hatori: "Yah! He likes to be a loner that's why. If he tries, i'm sure he will be able to get along with everyone. It is the right timing now to make and gather friends in high school!"
Adachi: "He's so pitiful."
Rita: "The both of you..."
Hatori: "Therefore, you must attend the camp. I will be by your side if anything happens....


... Adachi san is around too! Ne?"
Adachi: "Um!"
Rita, helplessly said: "I understoond." and he leaves.
Hatori thinks "Now, i've changed a little. I can speak normally to Adachi."
Rita turns back: "Hatori, just now, Thank You."

Hatori, blushed: "um." and she thinks "I can do it, can't i?"

The scene changes to Hatori hugging Nakajima.
Nakajima: "Uwaaa! What is it?" 
Hatori: "I'm great! I shall not be persistently jaundiced over minor matters and i shall stop hating Adachi. Don't i just look like any other heroine?"

Hatori thinks "I've changed...

 ... what do you think? I've changed! Matsuzaki Hatori, being the best heroine is my aim!!"

***
I'm officially rooting for Kousuke now even though he brought Hatori to a love hotel but in the end he stopped when Hatori says she can't do it. Rita is hopeless.

Labels: Heroine Shikkaku, Manga

posted by 腐女子 at 1:27 AM